My Recount on Duffy Show

By S.Sanujan

Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels	“Yoo, Hoo”. As I shouted to myself with joy and happiness, when Mrs McLean said to us that there were going to be a Duffy show in the hall after morning tea. I hope that the Duffy show were going to be magnificent performance.
Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs Write in the past tense Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia Use connectives	When we got in the hall I saw three people. There was man and two girls and the man was called Duffy and the two girls were called Siana and the other girl was called Antonia. The Duffy’s hair looked as same as a bush and he was as funny as clown. Then they started their performance. At the start of the show there was a girl called Siana and she doesn’t like reading because she can’t read and. The other day a boy called Duffy was borrowing some book from the library to read then Siana thought that Duffy was buying some books. Then Siana went to Duffy and asked him like “Are you buying these book” and Duffy said “No, I am borrowing these book for free”. Then Duffy took Siana to the library and Duffy introduced Antonia the librarian to Siana and then Duffy asked Siana to get library card so Siana could also borrow some books from the library and she could also read. Then Siana said that reading was boring but watching T.V was fun and Duffy asked Siana some question and Duffy gave Siana some book to read and when she started reading a book she teleported to a new magnificent world. Then she began to read. The other day Siana’s mother came then she Duffy asked to Siana’s mother to sign up for a library card but she didn’t sign up for a new card but then Duffy ask Siana’s mother her favourite thing to and she said that she liked fishing then Duffy gave her a fishing book and Siana’s mother also began to read.
Conclusion Sums up how you felt about the experience.	It was a fantastic show and I really enjoyed the part where Siana teleported to a new world. That was a great experience I had.

This is a recount on the Duffy Show. I think I did well with my writing.