My Recount Scaffold

By S.Sanujan

Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels	Yuppie! shouted very loudly with happiness to myself, when my mum said that we are going to my friend Ajhushan’s house and I can play with him on his trampoline and we also can play fighting. I thought that my day was going to be fun but sometimes me and my friend fight for real and both of us get into trouble and we had to lie to our parents so we don’t get into a big trouble.
Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs Write in the past tense Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia Use connectives	When we arrived at Ajhushan’s house with my car it was really dark and I felt like being alone in a haunted room. Then Ajhushan came out and opened the front door of his house and he let us in. I asked my parents that can I have a sleepover and my parents said yes and I said thank you. The next day I woke up early and I also made Ajhushan woke up. When he woke up he said that he need more sleep but I forced him to wake up. After Ajhushan woke, we went and we had our breakfast. Then me and Ajhushan went out to play on his trampoline. Our first game was the god fight. First we had to choose which god we were going to be and then we start playing. I said to Ajhushan that real god have power and we had to pretend like we have powers. Next we made up a game called the elephant attack we had to chose who were being a elephant and who were being a human. I choose the human because human can run with two leg and the elephant can only run with four legs and Ajhushan had to bend his body and to run with four leg. Ajhushan couldn’t run and attack because no one can run with four leg. When we started playing our game Ajhushan ran and he jumped on me like a rhinoceros and I screamed so loud because he jumped right on my face. Our next game was the running kangaroo. The rules to play running kangaroo was that you are not allowed to hit anyone and one person had to be a truck and the other person had to be the kangaroo and the truck have to chase the kangaroo. The kangaroo can only hop like a bunny but the truck run like a ostrich. Playing all those game made us tired so we went inside the house and had a drink of water and we were really hungry and my stomach were rumbling like a T Rex roar and me and Ajhushan wanted to have some lunch so we sat on the mat and we ate all the yummy food and I said “Yum, Yum”. After that my parents came to pick me up.
Conclusion Sums up how you felt about the experience.	I ran to my car and I saw Ajhushan waving his hand to me and I waved back to him. He said “Good Bye”. Then we went home. I felt really excited because I might have another experience at Ajhushan’s house.