The rise of the five ghosts

It was a nice day at the Dr Trayaurus’s and his friend’s Star Lab. Sanujan, Tai, Jeremiah, Jack, San kyaw and Alex went to visit them after 3 years. After Sanujan and his friends reached there, they all met Dr Trayaurus in the main entrance. Dr Trayaurus was so pleased. After a hour later they had a great tour of the lab. “Oh sorry Mr Trayaurus we have to go” said Sanujan.

On there way back they saw a beautiful mansion. “Hey look, I want to go to that mansion” San kyaw said with a smile up to his ears. “Ok fine” moaned Jeremiah. San kyaw jumped. They got out of their car and walked in casually. San kway opened the door and while taking small step on the spot

“Hello, Hello, HEEELLLOOO” Screamed Alex. “BOO” Shouted Jack, “AAAHH, that no amusing” Jeremiah replied reluctantly. San kyaw took a step. They heard a strange noise.“TOC, TOC, TOC”. That noise came from a small room. Jack crept close to the room. They opened the door slowly. They peeked inside and there was… 5 ghosts flying in the air. Tai screamed. They all started to run. The 5 ghosts started following them.

Sanujan ran out of the room, while screaming. The others followed him and they all charged into another room and they saw 10 bricks and hammers. The ghosts ran into the room and Sanujan got a brick in his hand. Sanujan smashed a ghost and Jack kicked the ghost. Then the others did the same thing. The ghosts had no chance to escape from the hits and the ghost looks like a ugly bat fainted.  

Sanujan saw little flap in one of the ghost’s face and he peeled it off “OOOHHH, MY GOD” screamed San Kyaw. “Dr Trayaurus“ they all said “Why were you acting like ghosts” said Sanujan, “Because I wanted to turn this mansion into a lab, but then people are trying to buy this mansion so I decided to scary them”replied Dr Trayaurus embarrassed. Tai got angry and he punched Dr Trayaurus. “now stop scaring people” said Jeremiah

Then they called the police and sent Dr Trayaurus’s to the jail. Dr Trayaurus was holding a steel bar in the jail, while crying. Jack felt confused, while sitting on the couch. “Why is Dr Trayaurus so bad” Moan Jack

Last term I had made a narrative called the The rise of the five ghosts. This term my writing group had to add or check if I have a

4 simple sentence, 3 Compound sentence and 4 complex sentence.

I only had 1 simple sentence.

I found finding complex sentences hard.